Monday, October 12, 2009

Sentence a Day

His Sentence

The sun hadn't quite set when we drove into Jalalabad, capital of the state of Nangarhar, a city once renowned for its fruit and warm climate.

FromThe Kite Runner by Khaled Hosseini. The author used an appositive to describe which city in Jalalabad he was talking about, and to describe the city.

My Sentence

The rain wasn't completely done when we walked into Wal-Mart, store of the town of Batesville, a town know known for its comfort and dry climate.

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