Monday, October 12, 2009

Sentence a Day

His Sentence

There is very little shelter here, almost no food, no clothes, no clean water.

From The Kite Runner by Khaled Hosseini. The author used and asydeton and an anaphora to describe the rundown orphanage in Afghanistan.

My Sentence

There is very little people here, almost no kids, no adults, no elderly people.

1 comment:

Lisa Huff said...

Oops--your sentence has a subject-verb agreement error: people are (not is)