Sentence a Day

His Sentence

On the south end of the garden, in the shadows of a loquat tree, was the servants' home, a modest little mud hut where Hassan lived with his father.

From The Kite Runner by Khaled Hosseini. The author used a periodic sentence to describe where Hassan and his father lived.

My Sentence

On the east end of the town, in the darkness of rundown building, was the monsters' hideout, a frightening big concrete building where Jack-o-Lantern lived with his family.